Stuff Straight from Heart …

My Valentine !!

February 9, 2008 at 8:03 pm · Filed under Valentine

In the midst of May,
There was a murky darkness over day
Strong winds sweeping the clouds
But they still closed the light away

On the mountain’s peak
Was I standing tall
Gazing the sky above
With a tear in my eye and about to fall

My insides all turned to ash,
And my heart blew away as I collapsed,
The black wind took them away
And held the darkness over, that day

Dissatisfied and dejected
I crumbled on the rocks
Murmering a silent prayer
Listening to see if the GOD talks

Left all alone in this sin world
With no one to live up for
Was asking for a small gift
A reason, a companion no more !!

Closed my hurting eyes
Trapped my breath inside
Stopped the pounding heart
Eagerly waiting for someone to arrive …………

The clouds then suddenly moved away
The winds slowed down
I saw the ray and rose
There was light and the darkness all gone

My prayers answered, there was You
Walking down from the God’s heaven
Coming to hold my life
And make my heart sweeten

I lifted my hand
And took your soft palm
Time had itself posed
As I lovingly proposed

I had you by my side
What a feeling it was like!!
I still remember the day
And just wear a silent smile

Days of pity had gone
And I was with you all along
God gifted me His best sunshine
By making you my Valentine

We are here to stay forever
If not our bodies, our love tender
As long as you are with me
I have no worries and nothing to ponder

Let me be greedy
And ask you once more
Make me feel lucky and blessed
Valentine’s day is approaching, Would you say Yes ??

RAKA! said,

February 13, 2008 at 11:26 pm

sahi jaa raha hai mere Ph.D shayar..good 1 (kidher se chepa? :P)
prats said,

February 14, 2008 at 9:06 pm

hey nice one yaar………………….abhi lag raha he ki tu mera bhai he…shabhash…
kroops said,

February 16, 2008 at 5:15 am

itz suc a good 1 man!!!!!!nw dis is my composition…..hey russh!!dis is kroops,wishin a wish,jus cn get sm1 like u,for dis little fish…
chocolateboy said,

February 22, 2008 at 5:52 am

that was awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nidhi said,

March 13, 2008 at 9:28 pm

Hey i didnt know this PJ king can write poems on such serious topics.. ;)..mind blowing!!!
komal said,

March 20, 2008 at 11:57 pm

Rhush…this is so romantic.. m jealous of poo;)
db said,

April 5, 2008 at 5:15 am

hey aaj padha maine yeh poem….d Valentine wala….

bhaut he badhiya….

jiyo….
Surabhi said,

June 21, 2008 at 1:18 am

awesome man !!

so so romantic …..( On the mountain’s peak
Was I standing tall
Gazing the sky above
With a tear in my eye and about to fall ) >> very touching …

Sahi jaa rahe ho bete…..aur likho aur likho….Dr Goradia